A message I'm about to send to my Senators. Any suggestions for improvement?

Sir/Madam,

If a car is used as a getaway vehicle in a crime, should the vehicle manufacturer be held responsible for tracking who was driving the vehicle at the time? How about the gas station that sold the gas used to power the vehicle during the crime? The neighborhood kid that washed the car last weekend?

If this sounds like nonsense, it is. No rational human would think laws like this would make sense or protect anybody. They would be a burden on society and stifle innovation that would otherwise benefit people’s lives in unimaginable ways.

And yet, that’s the road we’re on with these competing amendments to the Infrastructure Bill around cryptocurrencies. It should be evident by now that this is a complicated and nuanced topic that needs to be debated on it’s own, leading to rational, educated and well thought out legislation that will benefit Americans, rather than harm them or hold them back while the rest of the world reaps the benefits from emerging technologies.

All of the ill conceived cryptocurrency amendments must be dropped from the Infrastructure Bill so that the issue of cryptocurrency legislation can receive the proper attention it needs, so that Senators have time to hear from industry experts and educate themselves, and so that the public can weigh in on the topic.

Please push to have all cryptocurrency amendments removed from the Infrastructure Bill. If that’s not possible, then at a minimum please support the Wyden/Lummis/Toomey amendment.

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